Saturday, September 29, 2007

Fire Within the Frame

Red cedar A-frame house
Sharp edges evident
from the inside

Souza's hair just
reaches her father's waist
My, how she's grown

An apron, stilettos, a strand of pearls
Seasoned ground beef
burns unnoticed

A whiskey sour nursed
above speared celery stalks
and the apron's knot

Second story spigot
Souza uncurls
in a tepid bath

Father's boots mount
the spiraling staircase
Hand-railings quake

Father cocks his head
inside the arching doorframe
Souza cries, widens her legs

Point-filed nails finger
pearls and collapse a stainless
steel lid onto the crockpot

3 comments:

Alana Noel Voth said...

Really beautiful, very brave.

Alana Noel Voth said...

P.S. I'm proud of you. I know you're venturing rough terrain. You'll make it. Keep up therapy; focus on your health, your son, leaves changing colors on the trees; keep writing. XXOO

Craig Sorensen said...

So painful, but rendered in a devastating beauty, Yahnilei. Each stanza is reminiscent of haiku to me. I see building layers of hidden images growing clearer in the shadows of the scant visible.

Wow.

Craig